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Fic:Vampire hunting is the world’s oldest profession (And I, dear Madame, am a professional) [2/24]  
Title: ‘Vampire hunting is the world’s oldest profession (And I, dear Madame, am a professional)’  [2/24]
Author: JenJM (me)
Pairing: Gabe/William, Mikey/William, Pete/Patrick, Brendon/Ryan, Jon/Spencer and many a few others.
Rating: NC-17 overall
Characters: Gabe Saporta, William Beckett, Pete Wentz, Patrick Stump, Mikey Way, others. Pretty much everyone from Cobras, Academy, FOB and MCR. Plus Maja Ivarsson of The Sounds, and I can tell you Green Day will appear somewhere along the way.
Word count: 96,000 total words
Warnings: language, blood, violence, killings, all the stuff you can find in a story where people kill vampires and vice versa. But these vampires have sense of humor.
Disclaimer: Gabe and William aren’t mine ç_ç they belong to each other themselves. Actually no one in here belongs to me, and it’s so sad.
I really don’t mean to offend anyone and nothing of what I wrote in this story is to be considered real, it’s all fiction.
Author’s Notes: Pete being a vampire and hunting others vampires is kinda taken from FOB’s video for “Sixteen candles”, all the other stuff is a product of my twisted mind.
Title from Cobra Starship’s “Prostitution is the world’s oldest profession (And I, dear Madame, am a professional)”.
As ever, feel free to report any mistake. Constructive criticism is welcome, feedback makes me happy!
Beta: my dear and patient [info]nejem
Summary: “In his late years, Gabe Saporta had come to consider himself a peaceful, harmless, even funny vampire. He rarely killed anyone, when he fed he always left his victims where they could be easily found and rescued, and sure thing he never wanted to be part of any clan ever again.” But his plans are ruined when he gets caught by a vampire hunters clan led by Pete Wentz, and things take an interesting path when William Beckett, a young hunter, becomes his jailer. Meanwhile Ryan Ross gets kidnapped by someone they didn’t expect to see again, and the clan has to find him before it’s too late. 

Crossposted. Like, a lot.

Chapter 1

Chapter 2
 
“Brent didn’t want us to know he took Ryan.” Patrick said slowly, eyes fixed on Pete’s back. they had gone back home despite Brendon’s protests, and they had managed to calm him down. “If he thinks we’re looking for him, he’ll do something stupid and we’ll find him easily.”
 
“That’s about the plan.” Pete nodded, looking out of the window.
  
“What if he freaks out and kills Ryan?” Brendon asked, closing his eyes at the sound of his own words.
 
“He won’t kill him.” Pete turned, looking directly at Brendon. “He did all this ‘cause he wants Ryan with him.”
 
Brendon stood and started to pace in the room, biting on his lip. “I can’t just sit here and wait.”
 
“There’s nothing else we can do.” Patrick stood and reached the boy, placing a hand on his shoulder. “Try to get some rest.”
 
Spencer stood and reached his friend, circling Brendon’s shoulders with his arm. “Let’s go, Patrick’s right, you need to rest.”
 
Brendon let Spencer guide him out without a word, not looking at the others in the room. Jon stood as well and Pete gestured him to wait.
 
“We need to tell the others, when are Vicky and the guys coming back?”
 
“A few days, she doesn’t know yet, the nest was pretty big.”
 
“Okay, get Brendon something strong. Whiskey or something. But keep an eye on him.” Jon nodded, heading outside without a word.
 
“You sure getting him drunk is gonna help him?” Patrick asked with a skeptical tone as the door closed after Jon.
 
“It’s the only way he can actually hope to get some sleep.” Pete sighed, turning to look at Patrick. “I’m surprised he hadn’t tried to run off on his own.”
 
“How d’you know he won’t try tonight?”
 
“Jon will be there with him, and Bren gets noisier than regular when he’s drunk.” Pete showed a little smile. “The whole building would hear him if he tried to sneak out.”
 
Patrick chuckled and wandered to the window, looking out. A pair of arms surrounded his waist and Pete placed a kiss on his temple.
 
“If I lost you, I don’t think I’d be able to deal with it.” Pete whispered in his ear, closing his eyes.
 
“You’d be.” Patrick smiled, resting his head back on Pete’s shoulder. “Eventually.”
 
“I love you.” Pete whispered on the skin of Patrick’s neck, his fangs grazing gently at the skin, immediately followed by soft kisses.
 
“I love you too.”
 
~~
 
Two days later
 
“Still no sign of Brent?” William asked as he sat down in the library.
 
“Nothing.” Spencer sighed, looking out of the window. It was already sunset, and Pete was going to want good news when he woke up.
 
“How’s Brendon holdin’ out?” Mike reached William and sat next to him.
 
“Jon’s with him, but it’s just a matter of time before he cracks and tries to go find Ryan.”
 
William bit on his lip, a thought coming back to his mind for maybe the tenth time. He thought about telling his friends, but he decided to wait until Pete was there too. He didn’t have to wait long, because the vampire walked in just a few minutes later.
 
“News?” He asked, his eyes scanning the room.
 
“Nothing.” Mike shook his head, sighing as Patrick joined them.
 
“I have an idea.” William looked unsure, and dared a glance at Pete’s eyes. He looked calm enough to risk. “Brent’s been in town for a couple of weeks right?”
 
“Forget it.” Patrick just said, shaking his head.
 
“Maybe Saporta knows something.” William insisted, stepping in front of Pete and stopping him from reaching the window. “It’s worth a try.”
 
Pete seemed to think about it, looking between Patrick and William. “He sure as hell knows something. Get him to talk.”
 
“Okay.” William nodded and headed for the stairs, thinking how he could get Gabe to talk. Blood. Vampires kind of adored it.
 
“He’s a bit overzealous about that guy.” Patrick raised an eyebrow, worried.
 
“He just wants Ryan back.” Mike sighed, standing from the couch.
 
“And if there’s someone who can make Saporta talk, it’s Bill.” Pete smiled halfheartedly at his own words, looking at the almost completely dark sky outside.
 
~
 
Gabe barely had the time to register William’s scent before the door opened and the boy stepped inside.
 
“Here’s the deal, you tell me where to find Brent Wilson and his gang and I’ll get you fresh blood.” William focused his gaze directly in Gabe’s curious one.
 
“It’s good to see you too.” The vampire smirked, leaning against the wall.
 
“Are you gonna help me or not?” William didn’t move his eyes, determined to get what he wanted. And he wanted Ryan back.
 
Gabe studied the boy’s face for a few seconds, his eyebrows slightly arched in curiosity. “What did he do?”
 
“He kidnapped one of us.” William narrowed his eyes, not exactly happy to share information with Gabe. “A close friend.”
 
Gabe nodded slowly, catching the hurt in William’s eyes at the thought of said friend. Finally he stood and showed a little grin. “Yours.”
 
“What?” William asked, clearly confused.
 
“Let me taste your blood and the deal’s on.” Gabe licked his lower lip, then waited, curious to know how far William was willing to go to save his friend.
 
William’s jaw tightened at those words and Gabe saw the change in his eyes, the betrayal, and the vampire wanted to take back his request.
 
“Okay.” William nodded slowly, not taking his eyes off Gabe once. “Where’s Brent?”
 
“I can’t find him, but I know someone who’s been tracking him for a while, still does.” Gabe leaned again against the wall, the smirk gone from his face.
 
“How do I find this guy?”
 
“He’s got a cell phone.” Gabe shrugged, his hands playing with the book he was still holding but his eyes focused on William. “Ryland Blackinton, his number is in the phone I had with me when you brought me here.”
 
“If it turns out true, I’ll be back for your blood.”
 
“Okie dokey, William.” Gabe had barely the time to reply before the door closed after William.
 
~
 
William entered the library and found Brendon sitting with Jon and Spencer, while Pete and Patrick were discussing something on the other side of the room.
 
“Pete.” William reached them, holding Gabe’s phone. “Ryland Blackinton, Saporta says he’s been following Brent for a while.” At the name Pete’s eyes widened a little, but William didn’t question him.
 
“Can we trust him?” Patrick asked, not convinced by the plan.
 
“Honestly?” William bit on his lip, remembering Gabe’s request. “I don’t know. But if it’s not true he won’t get his reward, so maybe it’s worth a try.” Pete looked at William but didn’t say anything, his eyes studying the boy’s face. “It might be the only chance we’ve got to find Ryan.”
 
“What did you promise him?” Pete’s voice was calm, but William felt a shiver run down his spine at the suspicious look in the vampire’s eyes.
 
“Fresh blood.” William held back the piece of information about whose blood it was, but it wasn’t exactly lying, right? “He hasn’t fed in days, he’s hungry.”
 
“He hasn’t fed in a week, but I’m not sure he’s that desperate already.” Pete arched an eyebrow, his eyes never leaving William’s.
 
“Maybe he wants to help us.” William replied, holding his boss’ gaze and showing a self confidence he really didn’t have in that moment. Pete was right, but Ryan was more important than a stupid deal.
 
Pete didn’t reply immediately, then without a word he took the phone from William’s hands and looked for the number. Once he dialed it, he gestured the group to shut up.
 
Hey, Gabe, what’s up?” A cheerful voice replied from the other end, and Pete recognized it immediately.
 
“Not Gabe, Pete.” A slow grin stretched the vampire’s lips and Patrick frowned, curious.
 
Wait, Pete as in Pete ‘I shag a werewolf’ Wentz?
 
“It’s good to hear you too, Ryland.” Pete sounded relieved and William frowned, wondering who that Ryland guy was.
 
I assume you finally caught Saporta, uh?
 
“He’s alive. For now.” Pete turned, eyeing Brendon on the couch, who was watching him intently. “He says you’ve been tracking Fucker Wilson for a while.”
 
You still hate him that much?” Ryland chuckled, and Pete raised an eyebrow. “Yeah, I lost him for a couple of days, but I picked up a trail this morning. Why?
 
“He took one of my guys.” Pete simply said, and he could feel the change in Ryland.
 
Who?
 
“Ryan Ross.” Pete saw Brendon take a deep breath and stand slowly, heading for the window.
 
Little Ryan?” Ryland sounded surprised and alarmed. Ryland had helped him save Ryan from his father in Las Vegas, a little more than ten years before. Ryan had been only eleven. “When?
 
“Two days ago.” Pete looked back at Patrick and sighed. “Tell me where you picked the trail, me and my guys will be there by tomorrow.”
 
He’s heading for Nevada.
 
“Shit.”
 
I’ll send you the coordinates on this number, we’ll keep in touch.” Pete heard a few rustling noises and a voice in the background. “They’re a bunch of newbies, hopefully it won’t be hard to get Ryan back.
 
“Be careful, that little shit can bite.”
 
Not this one bastard.” Ryland grinned, referring to himself. “Oh, and Saporta isn’t all that bad.
 
“See you later.” Was all Pete said before ending the conversation. He looked up and focused his gaze on Brendon’s back. “Jon, Spencer, call Mike and get ready. Patrick, get the stuff, we’re heading for Nevada.”
 
“I’m coming with you.” Brendon turned, the look in his eyes half desperate half determined.
 
“Brendon, you’re not lucid enough to fight, you might --” Pete started, but Brendon went to stand right in front of him, his eyes furious.
 
“It’s Ryan.” Brendon hissed, and Pete looked at his friend, knowing it was wiser to leave him home. “Either you lock me up in the basement, or you bring me with you.”
 
Pete sighed, his hands resting on Brendon’s shoulders. “Go get ready.”
 
Brendon was out of the room in no time, heading upstairs with Patrick, Spencer and Jon.
 
“What about me? I wanna help too.” William looked expectantly at Pete, eager to join them and kick Brent’s ass.
 
“I need someone to stay here, Bill. We can’t leave the house unprotected.” Pete replied, watching William open his mouth to reply. “Someone might be waiting for us to lower our defense. You’re probably the only one who can face an assault alone long enough to call for help.”
 
At those words William frowned, surprised Pete trusted him that much. “You sure?”
 
“I’m sure.” Pete smiled reassuringly, then his smile turned into a grin. “I mean, I trained you for the last fifteen years for what? Making popcorns?” William let out a soft laugh, and one of Pete’s hands went up to ruffle William’s long hair. “Just put on the lockdown system and don’t get too distracted with Saporta.”
 
“I won’t.” William grinned, slapping Pete’s hand away from his head and fixing his hair.
 
“Pussy.” Pete laughed, heading for the door.
 
“You trained me.” William retorted with a sarcastic smile, causing Pete to laugh again as he reached the doorstep.
 
“Damn right.” Pete turned to look at him and shook his head, amused. “Be careful.”
 
“You too.” William nodded and his smile faded slowly. “Bring him back.”
 
With a nod and a meaningful glance Pete left the room, leaving William alone with his thoughts.
 
~~
 
A day later
 
William knew he had to respect his part of the deal, but every time he thought about it, his chest tightened painfully. He hadn’t expected Gabe to do such a request, and it had hurt for some reason. And William really didn’t want to know why it hurt.
 
Knowing that sooner or later he had to do it, he pushed the door of the cell open, taking a deep breath. It was better to do it when Pete wasn’t around, anyway.
 
“You’ve been standing out there for something like ten minutes before coming in.” Gabe didn’t raise his gaze from the book, a little smirk stretching his lips. “Something’s bothering you? Are you scared of me?”
 
“You’re chained to a wall, I have no reason to be scared.” William simply replied, closing the door with a slow move.
 
“I wasn’t talking about that kind of scared.” Gabe looked up, meeting William’s eyes, surprised to see dejection and yes, some kind of fear.
 
“I’m here to pay my debt.” William ignored the vampire’s words, keeping his voice emotionless.
 
“Okay.” Gabe closed the book and put it on the floor, standing slowly. “Come here.”
 
William pushed the chains button without warning, and Gabe found himself forced against the wall, his arms unable to move.
 
“I’m starting to think you enjoy this way too much.” Gabe grinned as William reached him, but the boy didn’t show any sign of amusement. Gabe looked at him and felt his nervousness come out in waves from his body.
 
“Just do it and let’s end this. I’ve got work to do.” William stopped in front of Gabe and pulled at the collar of his v-shirt, exposing his neck as his eyes closed.
 
Gabe leaned in, inhaling slowly as William’s emotions became clearer. Gabe hadn’t fed in days, he was starting to get weak, so if he could sense those feelings so well, then it meant they were strong. Too strong.
 
He placed his lips on William’s neck and felt him tense; the boy was fighting the instinct that told him to run as hell, and all to keep the word given to his prisoner, to his enemy. He was exposing himself to Gabe Saporta, the ruthless killer.
 
Gabe smiled and kissed his way up to William’s ear, smiling. “Raise your hand” He whispered, then leaned back against the wall, seeing William open his eyes, confused. “C’mon, raise your hand.”
 
William did as he was told, and Gabe smiled. “You’ve never been bitten?” There was a little pause, and William wasn’t sure if he was supposed to answer. “Of course you have, you’re a hunter.” The boy didn’t reply as Gabe’s eyes turned to a very pale shade of grey, a thin line of light blue circling the irises. “But no one fed on you before, isn’t it?”
 
William just shook his head, his eyes closing as his hand trembled a bit. He felt Gabe’s lips close around his index finger and his eyes flew open again, unsure and wary. Gabe made eye contact and bit gently on the thumb, careful not to graze the skin, then sucked gently.
 
It lasted a few seconds, then Gabe smiled and let go, his eyes going back to his deep dark brown, and his fangs returning to a shorter length.
 
“You…you didn’t…” William brought his hand down, confused and surprised.
 
“You’re willing to let me feed on you just to keep your word. A word you gave to save your friend. It might be defined moronic, but I find it noble. And I kind of have a thing for noble.” Gabe smiled softly, eyes never leaving William’s. “Your blood is too precious for me to steal it.” He saw something similar to shock in William’s eyes and his smile widened a bit. “If you ever decide to let me feed on you because you want to, not for business, then I’ll be happy to have the honor of being the first one.”
 
“But…the deal…” William frowned, not sure he’d heard right.
 
“Your debt is paid off, Bill.” Gabe rested his head against the wall and closed his eyes. “And I’m fairly sure you said you had work to do.”
 
William felt a smile rise to his lips as his chest felt suddenly lighter. Without thinking about it he leaned in, placing a kiss on Gabe’s cheek. “Thanks.” He whispered to the vampire’s ear before stepping back and going for the switch.
 
“Let me know how’s your friend.” Gabe still had his eyes closed and a little smile on his lips.
 
“Sure.” William bit on his lower lip, exiting the cell with a wide smile, keeping all the questions for another time.
 
~~
 
“You brought one of Wentz’ gang here?” Tom looked at Ryan, then at Brent again. “Are you fuckin’ nuts? Why didn’t you tell us?”
 
“He’s not gonna be one of Wentz’ buddies for long.” Brent hissed back, eyes flaring with rage. “He’s gonna be one of us.”
 
“I told you to go fuck yourself once, what makes you think I won’t do it again?” Ryan locked his gaze with Brent’s angry one, and the change made him shiver.
 
“’Cause baby, the kind of bond we’ll have will be too strong even for you.” Brent smiled, leaning down and baring his fangs at Ryan.
 
“Don’t.” Ryan whispered, paling visibly as Brent gestured the others to leave them alone. “Brent, don’t.”
 
“Or what? You’re gonna call big bad Pete? Or Brendon maybe?” Brent gripped Ryan’s bounded wrists and forced him to stand from the floor, pushing him against the wall. His hands were icy and his grip stronger than Ryan had imagined. “They won’t help you this time.”
 
As a reply Ryan tried to kick the vampire, who just laughed and pushed him harder against the wall, their faces coming much closer. Brent grinned again, showing his fangs as his eyes turned slowly to an unnatural ice-like color, and Ryan shivered, knowing it meant the vampire was about to feed. On him. Brent was about to turn him.
 
As the sharp fangs sank in Ryan’s neck the boy closed his eyes, focusing on the only memory he could grasp in the quick blurring swirl of images that invaded his mind. Brendon.
 
That seemed to make Brent only angrier, and the vampire sank his teeth deeper, intentioned to hurt Ryan as much as he could, with his mind and with his bite. The cry that escaped Ryan’s lips made Brent curl his lips in a smirk.
 
When Ryan almost lost consciousness, Brent laid him on the floor, using his fangs to cause two deep cuts in his own wrist. He brought his injured arm to Ryan’s lips and let a few drops of blood fall in his open mouth.
 
“No.” Ryan whispered, trying to turn his head, but Brent gripped his hair and forced him to swallow more blood. Ryan fought the instinct for a few seconds, than gave up, his mouth attacking Brent’s wrists like his life depended on it.
 
“Just like that, baby, it’s gonna be okay.” Brent smirked, his free hand caressing Ryan’s head as the boy sucked on the wound with all his strength.
 
~~
 
Two days later
 
Pete looked around, sensing a movement not far from where he stood. A faint scent reached him and he started to run in that direction, surprising Patrick and Ryland.
 
“This way.” Pete yelled, running as fast as he could, getting closer to the young vampire who was trying to escape. It took him a few minutes to reach the fugitive, but when he finally did, he hit him with the handle of his sword, making him fall.
 
Pete grabbed the boy’s collar, literally lifting him from the floor as Ryland and Patrick reached him.
 
“Tom?” Pete narrowed his eyes, surprised to recognize one of William’s old friends who had left their group a long time before. “What the hell?”
 
“Shit shit shit. Shit.” Tom muttered, trying to get free. “I swear, I didn’t know it was Ryan until he brought him at the nest. I swear.”
 
“Where is he?” Pete asked, his eyes going grey and his fangs showing. “Where?” He yelled, startling the young vampire.
 
“I…I’ll bring you…just don’t…” Tom shivered at the look of bare rage in Pete’s eyes. “Don’t kill me.”
 
“We’ll see.” Ryland punched him and took both his wrists, tying them together. Pete put him down and shoved him, angry.
 
“Walk.” Pete hissed, his hand going to Tom’s head and gripping his short blond hair, yanking back. “And if you lie or pull some trick on us, I’ll do things that’ll make you beg for death.”
 
Tom nodded, the sheer terror in his eyes telling Pete he wasn’t going to risk.
 
“How long?”
 
“T…Ten minutes.”
 
“I’ll warn the others.” Patrick said, taking out his phone.
 
~~
 
A/N: Last time I forgot to say this, Mike is Mike Carden, not Mikey Way. *nods* We’ll see Mikey Way in a couple of chapters.
Also, I’ll try and update once a week at least. Twice sometimes. I’ll see how the week goes.
See you soon,
JM.

 
 
 
I'm feeling...: creative
 
 
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Mink[info]mink_me on January 26th, 2008 07:39 pm (UTC)
i can somehow feel i'm getting into 24 weeks of clif hangers.
i hate you in a good way :D.
i like this story.
JenJM: williambeckett_lip[info]jen_jm on February 3rd, 2008 01:08 am (UTC)
You totally are, sorry. LOL
But I'm glad you like this anyway. <3
With magic soakin' my spine.: Frank - B&W[info]kittygrenade on January 26th, 2008 08:21 pm (UTC)

“Wait, Pete as in Pete ‘I shag a werewolf’ Wentz?”

I just love that line so much.

And this story is very interesting, keep up the good work! lol =^-^=
JenJM: williambeckett_lip[info]jen_jm on February 3rd, 2008 01:09 am (UTC)
I laughed so hard when I wrote that. Happy I wasn't the only one. LOL

Thanks, glad you like it! <3
hopelessly hopeful: {peace bden}[info]nejem on January 26th, 2008 08:35 pm (UTC)
sweetgummybears I want Brent DEAD. V__V

Gabe is SO made of awesome, I love him I love him I love him, he's just... lovable!!! :DDD

Tom, that babbazzo!!! ...hun, what's with all the ex members being evil? XDDDDDDDDDDD

the Peterick moment was pure LOVE ♥ *____*

and I like how Pete is all: "Ryan got kidnapped. Get Brendon drunk. *nods*" LMFAO!!! XDDDDDDDDDDD
JenJM: williambeckett_lip[info]jen_jm on February 3rd, 2008 01:10 am (UTC)
I know, hun, Brent is evol. *nods*

Not all ex-members are evil! LOL

And poor Brendon, he's forced to get drunk. LOL Don't laugh at him. XD
jessi watson[info]bowiscute145 on January 26th, 2008 08:37 pm (UTC)
ah, loving this, am a bryden shipper so especially loving brendon's and ryan's parts in this.
cannot wait for more, tis wonderful.
JenJM: williambeckett_lip[info]jen_jm on February 3rd, 2008 01:11 am (UTC)
Thanks! Happy you like this. ;) And yeah, there will be more Brendon/Ryan in the future, even if the story isn't completely focused on them. :P
(no subject) - [info]bowiscute145 on February 3rd, 2008 11:07 am (UTC)
Saskia[info]the_limousine on January 26th, 2008 08:53 pm (UTC)
My hate towards Brent is now undescribable. Seriously. He's pure evil, so evil that's it's not even funny.
Oh well...Gabe makes it up for all of Brent's evilness...sorta. Gabe makes me smile.
And yay! Mike ♥
Update once a week? D:
Lol, that's fine. We'll have to deal with it.
♥♥♥
JenJM: williambeckett_lip[info]jen_jm on February 3rd, 2008 01:12 am (UTC)
I know, he's evil and he so deserves to die in this. Just keep in mind I'm a sadistic writer. LOL
I got to change my mind on the updating, 'cause I can't possibily wait a week before posting, it'd get a bit hard to follow the story.
Ana: conor[info]halighanawfulie on January 26th, 2008 09:16 pm (UTC)
I have to say that I really like the way you write, It's only the second chapter and I cant wait for the next. It's addictive :)

Good Job :)
JenJM: williambeckett_lip[info]jen_jm on February 3rd, 2008 01:13 am (UTC)
Thanks so much, I'm happy to hear that. <3 I like to give addiction to people. LOL
ayla[info]dem_bitchz on January 26th, 2008 09:33 pm (UTC)
*screams* :O

NOOOO RYAN!!!
this is seriously like one of my favorite fics ;D
and i can not wait for somthing to happen between gabe and william

*tapps fingers together evily*

muwhahah!
JenJM: williambeckett_lip[info]jen_jm on February 3rd, 2008 01:13 am (UTC)
I know, I've been so cruel to him. But it's not over, I can be worse. LOL

And yeah, Gabilliam action isn't very far. *grins*
Bhope!: Music: Cobra Starship[info]principessahope on January 26th, 2008 09:45 pm (UTC)
I just started reading this today and it's awesome (I usually don't go for Vampire fics, idk why)!
Can't wait for the next chapter :)
JenJM: williambeckett_lip[info]jen_jm on February 3rd, 2008 01:14 am (UTC)
I'm happy you like this despite the...vampireness. LOL
Thanks! <3
victoria[info]wish_waster on January 26th, 2008 09:55 pm (UTC)
siodjg
poor poor ryan.
i love how brent is the bad guy. hah.
stupidmcdonaldsemployee.
i really like this, a wholewhole lot.
: D
♥♥♥
JenJM: williambeckett_lip[info]jen_jm on February 3rd, 2008 01:15 am (UTC)
I couldn't help making him the bad guy. Whoops. LOL
Hope you'll still like this. <3
heather//coppertone.[info]beautifularmour on January 26th, 2008 10:19 pm (UTC)
So I just read both parts, and I'm pretty much hooked. I'm not usually one for vampire fics, but I dunno, this on is different for some reason.

Amazing ♥
JenJM: williambeckett_lip[info]jen_jm on February 3rd, 2008 01:15 am (UTC)
I'm happy you're hooked despite it's a vampire story, and I hope you won't change you mind. XD
Thanks! <3
Amadeus[info]ourgossip_lips on January 26th, 2008 11:52 pm (UTC)
<3
I love this.
It's brilliant.
Can't wait for more!

I'd leave a proper comment, but I'm on my iPod Touch and it takes too long.
Just know that I could write a crapload about how amazing this is.
JenJM: williambeckett_lip[info]jen_jm on February 3rd, 2008 01:16 am (UTC)
Thanks so much! <3 *sends kiss*
I know how annoying writing can get on those things, don't worry. ;)
but6682[info]but6682 on January 27th, 2008 04:13 am (UTC)
YAY I LOVED IT!

sadly I want more again lol
-still wants hxc Gabe and Beckett seckz-
JenJM: williambeckett_lip[info]jen_jm on February 3rd, 2008 01:17 am (UTC)
Thank you! <3

Gabe and Beckett action isn't far...maybe. LOL *is evil*
aislina[info]aislina on January 27th, 2008 10:07 am (UTC)
likeylikeylikeylikeylikey
yay! vampires + FBR = ♥
JenJM: williambeckett_lip[info]jen_jm on February 3rd, 2008 01:18 am (UTC)
Thanks a lot!! <3
[info]cursed_bouquet on January 27th, 2008 11:59 am (UTC)
There's something so incredibly hot about William Beckett offering his neck to a chained-to-the-wall, vampire Gabe Saporta =) I don't know what it is...

And the prospect of Mikey Way in a couple of chapters has me jumping in my seat =) I can't fucking wait!
JenJM: williambeckett_lip[info]jen_jm on February 3rd, 2008 01:19 am (UTC)
Thank goodness I wasn't the only one to think that. LOL I'm glad you appreciated, in my head it was quite a lovely image. *_*

I kinda counted wrong...Mikey's in the next chapter. :P Whoops. LOL
razzlefrazzle[info]razzlefrazzle on January 27th, 2008 04:26 pm (UTC)
This story is simply lovely.
I havent read slash in...eight months and its nice to come back to a really good story
JenJM: williambeckett_lip[info]jen_jm on February 3rd, 2008 01:19 am (UTC)
Thanks! I'm glad you're happy to come back to slash with this story. <3
ne0nlazytights[info]ne0nlazytights on January 27th, 2008 05:09 pm (UTC)
ahhhhh! i've been dying for more since you first posted. i love this story already. don't even know what else to say but, i hope you update soon
JenJM: williambeckett_lip[info]jen_jm on February 3rd, 2008 01:20 am (UTC)
Thank you, I'm happy you're liking this! <3
And yeah, I'll update more often from now on. XD
*Shibby*[info]gangsta_shibby on January 27th, 2008 05:58 pm (UTC)
Gabe so wants William, teehee.

Yay Ryland! He's my fave.

I am so livid about Brent. How dare he do that to Ryan! Please tell me Pete kills him?

LOVED this, can't wait for more!

XD
JenJM: williambeckett_lip[info]jen_jm on February 3rd, 2008 01:21 am (UTC)
You're damn right, he wants William.

I couldn't leave him out, love him too much.

Can't tell you, but you'll find out sooner or later. *nods in a very evil way*
Rebecca[info]princesssephora on January 27th, 2008 07:55 pm (UTC)
Ahh another great chapter. I loved the Gabe and Bill part, that was very sexy and cool. But poor Ryan :(. I can't wait for the next part.
JenJM: williambeckett_lip[info]jen_jm on February 3rd, 2008 01:22 am (UTC)
Thanks! I'm happy you liked this chapter as well! <3
Rea[info]unfamiluartheme on January 27th, 2008 11:27 pm (UTC)
DKLSFJSKLFJSLKJFFKSJFLS
:D YAY RYLAND
D: NO TOM FKJLFJSKFSKFS.
i actually yelled "NOOO TOM'S ON THE BAD SIDE"
haha.
ughhhh i cant wait for the third chapter.
JenJM: williambeckett_lip[info]jen_jm on February 3rd, 2008 01:23 am (UTC)
Tom on the bad side is kind of sad, I know. But never say never. *grins*
Third chapter in a few minutes, finally. ;)
[info]le_disko_queen on January 28th, 2008 03:10 am (UTC)
So I don't usually like vampire fics, but I like this one.
It's kind of refreshing to see a story with Brent in it.
Even if he is, as usual, the bad guy.

Regardless, I like this a lot.
More please.

<3
JenJM: williambeckett_lip[info]jen_jm on February 3rd, 2008 01:25 am (UTC)
Happy you're liking this despite vampires and werewolves and the other stuff. XD
I know, I needed someone who wanted Ryan...and in my head, Brent wants Ryan so bad. I can be such a fangirl. LOL

Thanks, and hope you'll still like this in the future. <3
|*-*|AnotherxDilutedxScenexWhore|*-*|: filthy beauty[info]kyakat_13_666 on January 28th, 2008 03:21 am (UTC)
Haha.
I had no clue until your A/N but that's not important.
Anyways.
I absolutely love it.
I love pretty much any FBR vampire fic. =]
But this is amazing.
I just wish that the cliffhangers would stop.
WHY DO GOOD STORIES ALWAYS HAVE CLIFFHANGERS?
.:mental breakdown:.
Okay, I'm fine.
=]
JenJM: williambeckett_lip[info]jen_jm on February 3rd, 2008 01:25 am (UTC)
I know, I forgot to mention it was Carden, sorry. :P
I'm a total cliffhanger junkie, so be ready, there'll be a lot. LOL Sorry about that, I just have too much fun leaving people clueless. XD *is evil*
[info]nerdxvomit on January 28th, 2008 04:05 am (UTC)
lsdjfds someone needs to kill brent
gabe's sexy in this!
cant wait for more!
i'm excited
JenJM: williambeckett_lip[info]jen_jm on February 3rd, 2008 01:26 am (UTC)
I know, he needs to be killed painfully. *nods*
More in a few minutes, don't worry. Well, actually yeah, do worry. *nods*
(no subject) - [info]nerdxvomit on February 3rd, 2008 02:46 am (UTC)
(Anonymous) on February 7th, 2008 07:02 pm (UTC)
duuuuuude (:
I love this. Im gonna go read the other chapterrrs.
Aaand, it has to be a great story, as there are 24 chapters (I was born on the 24th) and we have the same initals.
Supersticious ftw!
Anyway, love this <3
x

Ps; im on meh sidekick and therefore cannot be bovvad signing in (:
Sulley_Hate[info]sulley_hate on March 2nd, 2008 05:19 am (UTC)
Yo. Sorry, but I'm addicted to spelling and grammar. You should see me on MSN, lol. Anyway, I found a couple more mistakes that your beta missed.

ONE-
“What if he freaks out and kill Ryan?”
- It should be 'What if he freaks out and kills Ryan?'

TWO-
Pete turned lo look at him
- Pete turned to look at him ?

THREE-
"if he could feel those emotions that well it meant they were strong"
- Try re-wording this sentence.

FOUR-
"kissed his was up to William’s ear"
- kissed his WAY up to William's ear ?

Loving the story, btw. <3 =)
xxSulleyxx

JenJM: williambeckett_lip[info]jen_jm on March 2nd, 2008 01:24 pm (UTC)
Don't need to apologize, I'm glad to receive tips on grammar and spelling, since I'm not exactly the best at it. :D
So thanks again, I'm off to fix those. :D

ps: I actually did add you on MSN, I hope you don't mind.
Becky: William Beckett[info]vanitykidman on July 21st, 2008 04:54 am (UTC)
Gabe as a Vampire = F*ckin hot!